Tone down Paul Giamatti performance, so he seems a bit more menacing and less cartoonish. There are too many story lines and we need to choose which ones we are focusing on and lift out the other ones, ie could reduce father arc to just Roosevelt?Ĭould cut out plane crash and Richard destroying spiders and start on armored car – don’t start with Spider-Man….let the danger/stakes to NYC build first and then have Spider-Man enter the scene heroically.
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